Summer is a great time to write those dreaded college admission essays.
While students will find plenty of advice about how to write a college essay, here is one of my favorite tips:
Don’t bore the admission readers with a dull opening line!
During admission season, admission reps often have to read dozens of essays a day. It’s inevitable that they are going to start blurring together, which is why applicants need to make theirs stand apart.
Applicants will win brownie points if they start their essays with a snappy opening. Need examples? If so, I’d urge you to read a 2008 article in the Stanford Magazine that includes opening lines that Stanford admission reps particularly liked. All the examples you see below came from winning essays from members of the university’s 2012 graduating class.
I love the Stanford article, which was published in the alumni magazine in 2008, and I’ve referred to it many times when I’ve talk to teenagers about their college essays.
Opening Lines from Stanford University Admission Essays
Here are some of the admission officers’ favorite opening lines:
- I have old hands.
- The spaghetti burbled and slushed around the pan, and as I stirred it, the noises it gave off began to sound increasingly like bodily functions.
- I’ve been surfing Lake Michigan since I was 3 years old.
- On a hot Hollywood evening, I sat on a bike, sweltering in a winter coat and furry boots.
- Unlike many mathematicians, I live in an irrational world; I feel that my life is defined by a certain amount of irrationalities that bloom too frequently, such as my brief foray in front of 400 people without my pants.
- I change my name each time I place an order at Starbucks.
- When I was in eighth grade I couldn’t read.
- As an Indian-American, I am forever bound to the hyphen.
- Some fathers might disapprove of their children handling noxious chemicals in the garage.
Here’s where you can read the entire Stanford Magazine article on college essay opening lines.